[Git][reproducible-builds/reproducible-website][master] shorten intro and fix grammar

[Holger Levsen (@holger)]

Holger Levsen pushed to branch master at Reproducible Builds / reproducible-website


Commits:
5d43b5b9 by Holger Levsen at 2022-07-27T12:57:02+02:00
shorten intro and fix grammar

Signed-off-by: Holger Levsen <holger at layer-acht.org>

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1 changed file:

- _events/venice2022/index.html


Changes:

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@@ -19,18 +19,14 @@ event_summary: Three days to continue the grow of the Reproducible Builds effort
   <a href="{{ "/events/berlin2017/" | relative_url }}">Berlin 2017</a>,
   <a href="{{ "/events/paris2018/" | relative_url }}">Paris 2018</a> and
   <a href="{{ "/events/Marrakesh2019/" | relative_url }}">Marrakech 2019</a>
-  the reproducible builds folks met again in Marrakesh.
-</p>
-
-<h2>Extended format</h2>
-<p>
-  Just like previous years, the heart of the workshop are three days of moderated sessions with the goals outlined just below.
+  the reproducible builds folks met again!
+  And just like previous years, the heart of the workshop are three days of moderated sessions with the goals outlined just below.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Goals</h2>
 <p>
-  As in previous years, the exact content of the meeting has been shaped by the participants,
-  these were our main goals as organizers:
+  As previously, the exact content of the meeting will be shaped by the participants,
+  these are our main goals as organizers:
 </p>
 <ul>
   <li>Physically meet each other after such a long time! ;-)</li>



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