[Git][reproducible-builds/reproducible-website][master] Misc copyediting.

Fri Aug 2 13:13:35 UTC 2019


Chris Lamb pushed to branch master at Reproducible Builds / reproducible-website


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a911e9dd by Chris Lamb at 2019-08-02T13:13:24Z
Misc copyediting.

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@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ event_summary: Seven days of hacking including a three-day workshop to continue
   Just like previous years, the heart of the workshop will be three days of moderated sessions with the goals outlined just below.
 </p>
 <p>
-  The days before and after these three days will have no organized activity, besides a short 'stand-up meeting like meeting', where we'll hopefully be sitting on the sunny roof-top, trying to find some shadow, and sharing our activities in the last 24h briefly. IOW: those are 'free days' where you can be excellent.
+  The days before and after these three days will have no organized activity, besides a short "stand-up"-like meeting, where we'll hopefully be sitting on the sunny roof-top, trying to find some shadow and briefly sharing our activities in the last day. In other words, those are "free days" where you can be excellent.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Goals</h2>
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ Holger, Vagrant, Chris and Mattia
 <h2>Sponsors and costs</h2>
 
 <p>
-  We haven't really started this but we will definitly be looking for sponsors very soon!
+  We haven't really started this but we will definitely be looking for sponsors very soon!
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -169,32 +169,32 @@ Holger, Vagrant, Chris and Mattia
 
 <h2>Travel and getting there</h2>
 
-<h3>Visa policy of Morocco</h3>
+<h3>Visas</h3>
 
-According to the <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Visa_policy_of_Morocco">wikipedia
-article on the Visa policy of Morocco</a> most of our attendees will not need a visa for
-entering Morocco, some unfortunatly do.
+According to the <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Visa_policy_of_Morocco">Wikipedia
+article on the Visa policy of Morocco</a>, most of our attendees will not need a visa for
+entering Morocco but some unfortunately do.
 
 <h3>Travel to Marrakesh and the venue</h3>
 
 <p>
-  The nearest airport is <a href='https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marrakesh_Menara_Airport'>Marrakesh
+  The nearest airport is <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marrakesh_Menara_Airport">Marrakesh
   Menara Airport (RAK)</a>.  There is also Marrakesh Railway Station (train service from
  and to Tangier, reachable from Spain by ferry).
 </p>
 <p>
-  From airport or railway station, take a taxi to <strong>Jemaa el-Fnaa</strong> (city centre). There's also a much cheaper bus leaving 42m in sight off the taxis.
+  From the airport or railway station, take a taxi to <strong>Jemaa el-Fnaa</strong> (city centre). There's also a much cheaper bus leaving 42m in sight of the taxis.
 </p>
 <p>
-  If you have been there before, follow the <a href='https://raw.githubusercontent.com/mirage/marrakech2017/master/data/map.jpg'>map</a>, the address is <strong>27 Derb el Ferrane Azbezt</strong>. A <a href='https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zgzwmyxlKBE'>video</a> contains detailed descriptions.
+  If you have been there before you should follow the <a href="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/mirage/marrakech2017/master/data/map.jpg">map</a>, the address is <strong>27 Derb el Ferrane Azbezt</strong>. A <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zgzwmyxlKBE">video</a> contains detailed descriptions.
 </p>
 <p>
-  If you haven't been there before, we recommend and we are happy to pick you up at Jemaa el-Fnaa (phone number will be provided once you registered). The way is easy and safe, but probably just a bit overwhelming on first arrival.
+  If you haven't been to the venue before, we recommend (and we are happy to..) pick you up at Jemaa el-Fnaa (phone number will be provided once you registered). The way is easy and safe but probably just a bit overwhelming upon first arrival.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Registration</h2>
 <p>
-  Registration <b>has not yet been opened</b> for attending this event. Please do not send a short email to <a href="mailto:holger at layer-acht.org">holger at layer-acht.org</a> yet and state that you want to attend, possibly shortly stating your involvement or other reasons why. Also make sure to tell your food preference and your t-shirt size, should you want to receive one and should we make one.
+  Registration <b>has not yet been opened</b> for attending this event. Please do not send a short email to <a href="mailto:holger at layer-acht.org">holger at layer-acht.org</a> yet to state that you want to attend yet.<!-- possibly shortly stating your involvement or other reasons why. Also make sure to tell your food preference and your t-shirt size, should you want to receive one and should we make one. -->
 </p>
 
 



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