[Git][reproducible-builds/reproducible-presentations][master] Tighten language

[Chris Lamb]

Chris Lamb pushed to branch master at Reproducible Builds / reproducible-presentations


Commits:
59eff026 by Chris Lamb at 2018-05-20T13:30:00+02:00
Tighten language

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1 changed file:

- 2018-05-20-MiniDebConf-Hamburg/index.html


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2018-05-20-MiniDebConf-Hamburg/index.html
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@@ -248,10 +248,10 @@ int main() {
 
       <section class="title" data-background="images/minidebconf-front1.svg.png" data-background-size="15%" data-background-position="90% 10%" data-transition="none">
         <h3>Lack of funding</h3>
-        <p>Progress is slowing down…</p>
-        <p>Some things go backwards…</p>
-        <p>Even impact on collaboration and community…</p>
-        <p>We kept up the weekly blog / isdebianreproducibleyet; could be misleading…</p>
+        <p>New progress is slowing down…</p>
+        <p>Some things go backwards (Jenkins, etc.)</p>
+        <p>Impact on collaboration / community…</p>
+        <p>Weekly blog / isdebianreproducibleyet misleading</p>
       </section>
 
       <!-- issues in-depth -->



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